tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3018069718728227978.post2257606804909237222..comments2023-05-09T16:09:21.782+01:00Comments on Vlad Yankov BA (HONS) Computer Animation Arts UCA Rochester: The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari reviewGarrison Impalahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10852666075056479609noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3018069718728227978.post-49149560846989468662014-09-24T22:09:25.122+01:002014-09-24T22:09:25.122+01:00Hey Vlad - just take the advice into the next revi...Hey Vlad - just take the advice into the next review - and well done on getting the first one written and published; as Jackie said, thoughtful and authentic. In terms of 'readability' consider leaving a line between each new paragraph and using the 'justify' option for the text layout (not align left, not align right, not align centre, the other one!). This will give your text elements a more 'bookish' quality and lend further credibility and professionalism to your writing on here. Good stuff :)tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3018069718728227978.post-20589623494213413302014-09-24T07:11:16.093+01:002014-09-24T07:11:16.093+01:00Thank you Jackie,
Not sure if I should edit the re...Thank you Jackie,<br />Not sure if I should edit the review based on your feedback or just take note for next time?<br />:)Garrison Impalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10852666075056479609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3018069718728227978.post-58575056327233180142014-09-24T06:32:32.689+01:002014-09-24T06:32:32.689+01:00A very thoughtful review Vlad - well done :)
I wi...A very thoughtful review Vlad - well done :)<br /><br />I will just make a couple of points at the moment - firstly, always make sure that your film titles are in italics. It is also good practice to make up a brief title for the images you use, so for example above, 'Fig.2, Cesare the somnambulist awakes'. You should then refer to the image within the text, for example, ' As is shown in Fig.2...'etc.<br /><br />Quotes should also be italicised, and you need 3 per review.<br /><br />Other than that, a good start - keep it up! :)Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com